How's my poem?

Hi, I am sure that you all had read my poem(What I yearn for). It is just below this post. Haha, that's composed by me. My first ever sucessful poem! I love it so much! But I am not trying to say that it is very good, it is just that I am very happy that I've composed a poem of mine. :) When I was walking home from school, I created this poem as I felt lonely that time. Love is what I yearn for, not that kind of love, but the warmth of kinship as well as friendship. Thanks for lending me your ears. I will see you. Bye!

- Ru Hui :)